02 September 2013

What the water said

1 comment:

Kate said...

Wow... wow! Is this your piece, Felix? May I print it and hang it on my wall? It will be so much easier that way, as I intend to read it over and over and over and over.

Have you any idea my fascination with the movements of water? With the PRESENCE of water and physical phenomena in general? I wrote a similarly freeform poem (far inferior to this, similar only in its water-mimicking structure), and I was bowled over to see that you had been moved to do the same.

This is beyond brilliant.